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I'm Ready To Go

Postby danwilson5 » Sun Oct 27, 2024 11:15 pm

Hi All,

It's been a while. Here is a new one my brother wrote. Any constructive criticism would be appreciated.

Dan

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Re: I'm Ready To Go

Postby mklankin@hotmail.com » Mon Oct 28, 2024 1:37 am

Hey Dan,

Awesome track. Grabs you right from the start, high-energy with super execution from you guys...par for the course. ;)

I love the change ups, for a solid, singable rock tune it keeps you guessing and that outro is really excellent!

Great job to you both and glad you're back - with a vengeance it appears! :o

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Re: I'm Ready To Go

Postby CrazySchmidt » Tue Oct 29, 2024 7:05 am

Hey Dan, really nice to hear this track from you and Kelly. :) 8-)

Man, I've got to say that this track turned out really, really well, Kelly's interpretation of guitar parts and vocal harmonies was perfect for this, you guys definitely have your sound. 8-)

One piece of advice (though I've mentioned this before with your tracks so I actually think it's a production choice by you and Kelly), is that the vocals are a little too proud. They are great, but they seem to leave music behind in the back ground for me. In any case, a great performance and recording.

I hope to be hearing more and more from you Dan, now that you have all that wonderful time on your hands. :lol: ;)

Nice work again guys, very well done. 8-)

Cheers, CS. :)
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Re: I'm Ready To Go

Postby Riff_Lovely » Tue Oct 29, 2024 8:50 pm

Hello Dan! Very good song! Very nice singing and melody. Also clear production. I like it.
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Re: I'm Ready To Go

Postby danwilson5 » Sat Nov 09, 2024 9:53 pm

Hi All,

First thanks for giving the track a listen and the kind words of support. I have remixed the song as per suggestions by CS and some others. Let me know what you think.

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Re: I'm Ready To Go

Postby CrazySchmidt » Tue Nov 12, 2024 6:31 am

Hey dude, I LOVE this new mix!!

I felt a new energy straight off the bat that gave me a sense of excitement that I didn't quite feel from the first release, this has a new energy that I feel has really improved the track and the levels are more evenly shared as well I feel. Also the vocal harmonies really seem to announce themselves with a new vigor that had my ears smiling. :) 8-)

Nice work brother!! 8-)

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Re: I'm Ready To Go

Postby danwilson5 » Tue Nov 12, 2024 6:38 am

Hi CS,

Thanks for the advice on the first mix. Two thumbs up.

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