New Song - Undecided

[danwilson5]

Hi All,

Here is a song my brother Kelly wrote. Let me know what you think. Any constructive criticism would be appreciated.

Dan

https://soundcloud.com/dan-e-wilson/und ... al_sharing

[mklankin@hotmail.com]

Hey Dan,

Solid, solid rockin' song. I'm jealous cus it sounds like Kelly sings effortlessly and I dig that smoking lead.

I've listened a few times and would have some suggestions to instrumentation and arrangement. If you're interested....maybe shoot me a private msg, if not, no worries.

Great stuff!
Michael

[CrazySchmidt]

Oh schit, i've only just now listened to this track, jeezzz, what a sweet riff, I'm actually jealous of that, I wish it was one of mine!!

Ok guys, very cool, I wanna join your band again!!! (or am I "Ace Frehley")

Nice work.

Cheers, CS.

[Riff_Lovely]

Nice sturdy stuff guy s , again very nice singing. You have realy rock voices. Some time remind me on Bad religion. I wait more stuff s.