Hey CS!
Dude, This is golden! I think this is the best track I've heard from you yet. I'm honestly kinda surprised that this is just a demo. The instrumental you have is really well written. The intro guitars playing off of each other with counter melodies is so inspiring. Even the tone is amazing! The ambience of the track is very atmospheric. Like I'm swimming through Colours or the Ocean.
The lyrics you have are really personal. From what I can understand about it, It's like being with someone really close but they might not know how much you love them. Kinda like a relationship. It relates to me in some sort of way actually. Man, and the vocals really match the song well! They're super clean and emotional!
I also just noticed this but there's a string section in the back when you start singing! That's freaking sick! It reminded me of Paradise by Bruce Springsteen.
Anyways, outstanding work on this! I'm looking forward to the full release of this song. This has lots of potential.
Cheers!
--Steve