Hello everybody.
I try to wrote song on english. I wrote one simple song, so i want to knew is this grammarly and phrazes ok. I need help with this. Thank in advance.
Lyrics:
Ver.
I wanna live my dream
Like a child i want to scream
I want to live like there is no tomorrow
Wanna (try) forget all my sorrow
REF.
I want it all now
I want world now
VERSE
I chase him trought narrow streets
When i look at him increse my heart beats
When i catch him i will hold him tight
Grab him like little child
REF.
I want it all now
I want world now
Outro
I want it
I want it
Now
I want it
I want it
All